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Writing Samples
Band 7

You recently stayed at a hotel and had a very pleasant experience. Write a letter to the hotel manager to thank them for the excellent service.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter in order to express my satisfaction with your adorable
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 which served to us (me and my family). I am afraid that I cannot thank you as perfectly as I thought. Actually, I heard about your
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 from a friend of mine, who is literally keen on your services. When I get off the plane in Egypt, the first thing I always do is rest for a day. At
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 time I emphasized to employees not to bother me until I left my room. Gratefully, they did what I said which I rarely face. The second thing I loved about the
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 was its food. Eventually, during my flight to Egypt, I was worried about food and my health (If eat something fatty, my blood pressure can be increased). Food and sanitation are much better than other hotels that I have been to before. Plus I am sure that whenever I go to Egypt again I am sure that I will stay at your
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. And I regret that I did not find out about
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 place in the past three years. Yours faithfully, Rachel Green.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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