The graph below shows China's population by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The graph below shows China's population by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows China's population by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The graph illustrates the ages of the population, which is in
percent
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per cent
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, in China from 1960 and forecast to 2050.
Overall
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, the peak point was reached by the age group of 15-64 people, in 2020. Meanwhile, the minimum was with the older generation, to be exact it is people 65+ ,in 1960. There are 3 eras of the society.
To begin
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with, in 1960, the most popular age was 0-14 but after that year the line started to slightly fall and it will reach 17.5 , in 2050.
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, the line that was the minimum for all the years except the
last
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2 decades is 65+. It moved steadily and was almost the same until 2010, after
what
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which
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it dramatically increased and will continue until 2050.
On the other hand
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, the middle group only for the first year was 15-64.
Hence
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, it significantly grew all the period until it reached 70 ,
moreover
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, it is the peak
for
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of
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all time.
Furthermore
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, after
that
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that,
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the line will sharply decline until the
last
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decade.

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