Many companies and organisations require their employees to wear uniform. What kind of jobs require uniforms? What are the disadvantages of wearing uniform to work?

A lot of jobs are letting their workers wear formal clothes in some kind of job. So , because of

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happening, there are many benefits and drawbacks

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wearing uniforms. Some people believe that wearing uniforms at work

offers

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allows

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workers to do their tasks in a better way and they will not feel different

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others. They will focus more on their job because they will not have to think of what will

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they wear at work every day .

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, the employee could wake up any time he wants without thinking about what he wants to wear that will let them have all their attention for the task and with that happening they will

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task achievement

Ensure that all main points are clearly developed and supported with specific examples.

coherence and cohesion

Work on creating smoother transitions between ideas to improve the flow of your essay.

coherence and cohesion

Try to provide a clearer conclusion to summarize your ideas effectively.

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You have made a strong start by introducing the topic of uniforms and presenting both advantages and disadvantages.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

118 words

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Cohesive appearance
Professionalism
Hygiene
Identification
Authority
Standardized look
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Discomfort
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Costly
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Job dissatisfaction
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Many companies and organisations require their employees to wear uniform. What kind of jobs require uniforms? What are the disadvantages of wearing uniform to work?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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The pictures show the process of making cherry jams

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Despite health warning,a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world.Why should we be concerned about this ?What solutions would you suggest?