The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Assel

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Assel
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Assel
The three pie charts illustrate the middle proportion of
sodium
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, saturated fat and added sugar in daily meals consumed in the United States.
Overall
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, dinner contributes the highest percentage
for
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of
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sodium
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and saturated fat,
while
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in
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apply
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added sugar
mainly
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is mainly
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consumed
snacks
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in snacks
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.
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, breakfast is the lowest part of all three nutrients. Dinner accounts for 43% of
sodium
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and 37% of saturated fat, making it the heaviest meal in terms of these two nutrients. Lunch follows with 29%
sodium
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and 26% saturated fat,
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breakfast is the least significant, contributing only 14%. Snacks,
on the other hand
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, constitute the largest proportion of sugar at 42%, which is almost double the amount consumed at dinner 23%. Lunch and breakfast contribute 19% and 16% of sweeteners respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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