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The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts display the total energy expenditure and electricity creation of the world since
last
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 year.
Overall
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, oil was the most consumed item around the globe,
while
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 coal was the most used item for electricity production.Other sources experienced slight increases over the course of a period. In world power consumption, oil was mostly consumed(34.3), followed by coal(25.1) and gas(20.9). The rest of the sources like nuclear, hydro and renewable wastes were utilized in very minute amounts. In total work power generation, coal(39.8)was used almost double the amount as compared to energy expenditure, followed by gas(19.6). Other sources like hydro and nuclear were used in the same amount 16.1 and 15.7 respectively. Oil was used almost five times less as compared to energy consumption which is 6.7. Other items were used in the least amount which is 2.1.

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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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