You recently purchased a kitchen appliance, but it was delivered late and damaged. Write a letter to the store manager to complain about the issue. In your letter: - describe what item and problems - explain how the late and damaged delivery affected you, - state what you would like the store to do to resolve the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about facing problem with late Linking Words
delivery
and damaged product. As, I did online shopping from Use synonyms
Mintra
site of glass Correct article usage
the Mintra
crocery
on 26th Correct your spelling
crockery
grocery
april
, Change the capitalization
April
Change preposition
for which
which
I paid online about $500 because it was very expensive and I Correct pronoun usage
apply
need
it to give as a present Wrong verb form
needed
to
my brother's first anniversary. On your online Change preposition
for
site
it showed Add a comma
site,
delivery
timing after a week, and my brother's anniversary was Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
at
the same date of Change preposition
on
delivery
which I found match timing, Use synonyms
however
, I got Linking Words
this
parcel after 2 weeks which gives me Linking Words
state
of dilemma, that what I could Correct article usage
a state
gave
on my brother's anniversary. I really Change the verb form
give
feel
Wrong verb form
felt
embarrased
that time but I managed the situation smartly.
Correct your spelling
embarrassed
However
, Linking Words
on
the time of Change preposition
at
Use synonyms
delivery
the Add a comma
delivery,
delivery
man was in Use synonyms
hurry
, he Correct article usage
a hurry
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
tried
to put Wrong verb form
trying
this
parcel on Linking Words
table
but in Add an article
the table
rush
the parcel Correct article usage
a rush
falled
down and the glass Correct your spelling
fell
crocery
Correct your spelling
ceiling
breaked
. He really felt sorry about it and I understand the situation. Fortunately, I have Correct your spelling
broke
suggestion
if you might send me Add an article
a suggestion
an
another Remove the article
apply
same
product with some discount that would be the Correct word choice
apply
last
option for me because I already paid Linking Words
for
Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
this
about $500 which Correct determiner usage
apply
then
going to be a big Linking Words
loos
if I do not get the purchase.
Thanks for Correct your spelling
loss
the
understanding, I'm looking forward Change the word
your
for
Change preposition
to
you
kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhnoor KaurChange the pronoun
your
parbhnoor2004
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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs that each address a single topic. This will improve the flow of your writing.
task achievement
Make sure to clearly state your expectation for a resolution, such as a replacement or refund, to reinforce your complaint's effectiveness.
task achievement
Your opening clearly states the purpose of the letter, showing your intention to address a problem.
task achievement
You included specific details about the purchase and the issues faced, which helps to illustrate your complaint effectively.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite