You recently purchased a kitchen appliance, but it was delivered late and damaged. Write a letter to the store manager to complain about the issue. In your letter: - describe what item and problems - explain how the late and damaged delivery affected you, - state what you would like the store to do to resolve the problem.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter to inform you about facing problem with late
delivery
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and damaged product. As, I did online shopping from
Mintra
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the Mintra
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site of glass
crocery
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crockery
grocery
on 26th
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April
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,
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which
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apply
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I paid online about $500 because it was very expensive and I
need
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it to give as a present
to
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for
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my brother's first anniversary. On your online
site
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it showed
delivery
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timing after a week, and my brother's anniversary was
also
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at
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the same date of
delivery
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which I found match timing,
however
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, I got
this
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parcel after 2 weeks which gives me
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a state
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of dilemma, that what I could
gave
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on my brother's anniversary. I really
feel
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embarrased
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embarrassed
that time but I managed the situation smartly.
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,
on
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the time of
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delivery
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delivery,
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the
delivery
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man was in
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a hurry
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, he
was
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tried
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to put
this
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parcel on
table
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the table
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but in
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a rush
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the parcel
falled
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fell
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down and the glass
crocery
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ceiling
breaked
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broke
. He really felt sorry about it and I understand the situation. Fortunately, I have
suggestion
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a suggestion
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if you might send me
an
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another
same
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product with some discount that would be the
last
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option for me because I already paid
for
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apply
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this
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about $500 which
then
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going to be a big
loos
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loss
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if I do not get the purchase. Thanks for
the
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understanding, I'm looking forward
for
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to
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you
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your
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kind reply. Yours sincerely, Prabhnoor Kaur

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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs that each address a single topic. This will improve the flow of your writing.
task achievement
Make sure to clearly state your expectation for a resolution, such as a replacement or refund, to reinforce your complaint's effectiveness.
task achievement
Your opening clearly states the purpose of the letter, showing your intention to address a problem.
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You included specific details about the purchase and the issues faced, which helps to illustrate your complaint effectively.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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