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The Table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

The Table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
The table provides data regarding how the
number
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 of
employees
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 (male and female) and
factories
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 changed in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
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, it can be seen that the total
number
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 of
employees
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 plunged over the period, with both male and female figures dropping significantly,
whereas
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 the
number
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 of
factories
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 saw a dramatic rise to virtually three times more
factories
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 in 1901 compared to 1851. Turning to details, male and female numbers stood at almost 300,000 and 200,000, respectively in 1851.
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, over the next two decades, these numbers witnessed a significant decrease to just over 80,000
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male
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) and 60,000 (female)
employees
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, bringing the total
number
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 of
employees
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 down to 140,000, which was more than three times smaller than that of 1851.
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 is
while
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 there were many more
factories
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 at the time of
this
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 period, with
this
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number
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 rising to over 600 in 1871, which was three times larger than in 1851.
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, 1871 to 1901 saw a rather steady decrease in all of the employee numbers, with virtually an equal
number
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 of men and women being employed in
factories
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,
totaling
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at
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61,000 in 1901.
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, there were slightly fewer
factories
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, with 600 of them operating in 1901, which was only 20 units smaller
that
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than
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of
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in
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 1871.
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 is despite the fluctuations that occurred over the second half of the period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, employees, factories with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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