The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how much different economic
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of people of the United States and the United Kingdom spends on
petrol
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. It is evident that, as we move from poorest to richest, the amount spent on
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increases among UK citizens,
whereas
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, Americans tend to spend less when we move along the same scale.
Firstly
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,the poorest
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of the United Kingdom spends 0.5% - 2.5% of their total income
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on
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petrol
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which is the least among all the other sections.
On the other hand
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, the poor
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of the US spends the highest percentage of their earnings which is 4% to 5.25%.A similar trend is seen in the middle-income
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where Americans are spending slightly more than the British.
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,some part of the richest
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of the US is spending slightly less money on
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when compared to the UK, Americans spend about 2%-4%
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the British spend 3.25 to 4% on fuel.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words section, petrol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditures
  • disparities
  • evolved
  • fluctuations
  • stabilization
  • significant gap
  • trends
  • economic conditions
  • vehicular technology
  • public transportation
  • summarise
  • comparison
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