You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi. Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: ⦁ Give the details of your journey ⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you ⦁ Suggest what can the manager do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I accidentally
forgot
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left
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my file
holder
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containing important papers in one of your taxis
while
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traveling
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travelling
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from XYZ airport to my hotel-Monte Carlo Inn. The journey took place around 9:00 AM and the number of
taxi
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taxis
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was BXYZ 123. Upon arrival at my hotel, I checked my belongings. I
relized
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realized
realised
that the file
holder
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had been missed. In the file
holder
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, there were some crucial
paper
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papers
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such
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as a passport, a work permit, and my graduation degree documents. Can you confirm my file
holder
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from
taxi
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the taxi
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driver? If you find it, can you send it to my home address
.
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I
locate
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am located
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in
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at
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700
balmoral drive
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Balmoral Drive
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, L5T 2E2, Brampton, ON. I would
appricate
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appreciate
you
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it
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if you help me in
the
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this
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situation. I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kaur.

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task achievement
Include more details about the contents of your file holder and why they are important to enhance the importance of your request.
coherence and cohesion
Consider using transition words to improve the flow between sentences and ideas.
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Try to be more specific in your closing statement by politely requesting a prompt response.
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The letter is polite and maintains a formal tone, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.
coherence and cohesion
The structure is logical with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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