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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel, when you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. . Say where you think you left the papers . Explain why they are so important . Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear
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/ Madam, I am writing
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hotwl
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hotel
 manager
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 because when I returned home after the meeting from the hotel, I saw that some important documents were missing. Perhaps,
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 left those papers in one of the tables
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 the right corner
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 the guest room on the third floor. I recently bought a house. But the owner brought the signed papers today after completing all the formalities. Those are very precious to me. If
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 lose the papers ,
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 lose my house. I request you to go there and look at it as soon as possible. I
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 you to find documents for me. I assume you have cameras in your guest room or if you could ask your cleaning crew and let me know
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 I hope you find the file. Many thanks in advance. Yours faithfully, ABC

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language
Ensure that you proofread your work for typographical errors, such as 'hotwl' instead of 'hotel' and 'ti' instead of 'on'.
task achievement
Make your request clearer by specifying what type of documents you want the manager to find, as well as any particular details about the documents that might help in identifying them.
coherence
In your introduction, clarify why you are writing the letter and mention that it is a formal letter. Starting with a clear purpose strengthens your opening.
coherence
Your letter has a clear and appropriate structure of salutation, body, and closing.
task achievement
You explained the significance of the documents effectively, which adds weight to your request.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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