The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of river water in
UK
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the UK
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good
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of good
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chemical quality during seven periods from 1990 to 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there are significant changes in four categories. The whales were popular in
graph
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which had the highest ratio, followed by Northern Ireland.
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, the rest of
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had the lowest
proporation
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proportion
.
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with, it is evident that both Whales and Northern Ireland remained
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same level in the first five years which they remarked
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95% and just under 90%. Compared with
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items were
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slightly.
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, there was
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a sharply
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sharply
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drop in the percentage
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in
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England, almost from 70% to
declined
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double.
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analyzing the diagram, one striking observation
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Scotland experienced
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gradually from 1990 to 2000. Turning to England
also
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witnesed
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witnessed
a slight increase in the
last
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periods.
Additionally
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, in 2000,both England and Northern Ireland continued to climb.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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