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The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005. (percentage)

The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005. (percentage)
The given line graph illustrates how many
cars
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 were owned by the
people
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 from UK between 1975 and 2005
Overall
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,
people
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 who owned 2 to 3
cars
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 increased
whereas
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 the remaining declined or remained stable throughout the period.
Additionally
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, most
people
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 in the UK have 1
car
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. With regards to the increasing
car
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 ownership where
people
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 who owned 2
as well as
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 3
cars
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 started at approximately 4% and over 5%, respectively.In terms of 3
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cars
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car
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 ownership, it increased to roughly 15% in 1985 where it continued to rise to nearly 20%
at the end
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 of the period.
Likewise
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, those who have 2
cars
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 in their house increased slightly to around 10% until the end of the timeline. Moving onto the remaining categories where it stabilized and decreased. Concerning
people
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 who have no
car
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, it decreased from just under 45% in 1975 to exactly 25% in 1985 before declining to nearly 25% in 2005.
Last
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 but not least, those who owned 1
car
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 relatively remained steady throughout the period at 45% even though it had a drop to under 40% in the middle of the timeframe.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, people, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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