You want to learn a language. A teacher who teaches this language lives near the area where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In your letter: - say how you came to know about him/her - explain why you want to learn this language - ask what help he/she can offer

Dear Mrs. Maya, I am

writting

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writing

this

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letter to inform you,

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that my

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name is Muhammad Ajiburrahman I am originally from here in west

lombok

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and my aim

want

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to visit your home. Because

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apply

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I have heard from my friends you are

a good tutors

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good tutors

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, particularly for

English

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the English

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language.

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why, I am looking for your home to ask

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for more

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information about how

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apply

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you can be my teacher for three

mont

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months

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, I

am still prepare

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knowlege

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knowledge

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Improve my

overall

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apply

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IELTS

sertificate

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certificate

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this

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is my goal to join next month

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at in

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international university

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abroad.

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, I hope you can teach me a lot of

skill

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for

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grow my English language before I take

real

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the real

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test next week at Tesla West Nusa Tenggara Indonesia. Thank you in advance, Ajik

arniaqlina44Sat May 17 2025

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language

Try to ensure correct spelling, such as 'writing' instead of 'writting', and keep an eye on grammatical accuracy.

structure

Consider breaking your ideas into clearer, more concise sentences for better readability.

task achievement

You have a clear purpose for writing the letter, which is to seek help in learning English. This demonstrates good task achievement.

tone

The letter has a friendly tone, which is appropriate for this context.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

134 words

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You want to learn a language. A teacher who teaches this language lives near the area where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In your letter: - say how you came to know about him/her - explain why you want to learn this language - ask what help he/she can offer

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think is a possible solution?

Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by the young in cities. What has caused this? What solutions can you suggest?