1. The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided diagram of the industrial

process

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of brick production

,

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consists of

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seven stages from raw materials extraction to final distribution for the building sector. The

process

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is characterised as linear progression, transforming from raw

clay

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into durable, finished

bricks

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. The

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commences with

digging

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the digging

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of

clay

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from the ground by using heavy machinery,

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as

excavator

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an excavator

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. Later

on

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raw

clay

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is

conveyd

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conveyed

to the processing plant where, after being placed on a metal grid, it is pulverised using a roller mechanism. By

uncorporating

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incorporating

sand and water

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the purified

clay

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, a

homogeneus

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homogeneous

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mixture is created.

Afetr

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After

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compound formed into individual

bricks

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by using

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this

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compound formed into individual

bricks

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by using a wire cutting machine or moulding frame. Freshly cut

bricks

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are sent to the special heat drying chamber

dor

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for

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1-2 days to reduce their moisture content. After the drying

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, all

bricks

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undergo firing in a kiln at elevated temperatures ranging from 870

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up to 1300

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, following on initial step of preheating between 200

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and 890

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.

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improve

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the

durabilityof

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durability of

the

bricks

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. Once they are fired, they are placed into a cooling

chamberbetween

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chamber between

2-3 days in advance before

to be

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being

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packed and transported to the construction centres.