In
recent era, the number of young generations, aged under 18, having outside activities after
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midnight
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topical since a part of society argued that
should be restricted by a law,
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others complained that they did not agree. To respond to
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based on both sides and believe that making a policy for restricting the youth
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outside after 12 pm is more convincing
the benefits.
Focusing on supporting
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night activities,
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adolescents tend to have many responsibilities which
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be done in the midday.
is because some universities have a longer learning time and demand their students to do so many projects and research.
, most of them come home late as they have to finish their discussions or conduct some meetings with
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colleagues. Some institutions believe that the longer study activities are, the higher
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performance of the young generation
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.
,
idea is misleading since there are some educational institutions in Japan showing an outstanding academic report without extending learning time. Even though the colleges have
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shorter time and
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to do, their learners still win some competitions and they can be hired by
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top-notch companies.
Turning to supporting the law, applying the rule to forbid adolescents’ midnight actions is beneficial as they can be prevented
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and criminality. Most of them feel exhausted after finishing so
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and complicated questions and
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home.
, there is an opportunity to get an accident in the way the individuals
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home.
, the higher criminality rate happens at night because there
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in all ways.
, after thorough consideration, I support the law should be applied as the positive impacts of
outweigh the number of benefits
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midnight actions for the youth under 18.