You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. Write a letter to the director of the Museum

Dear

sir

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Sir

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madam

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Madam

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, I am writing

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letter to know about the job posting in the museum. Recently, I have seen an advertisement

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for

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your museum in an English newspaper where they mentioned the need

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for

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a guider

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guider

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guide

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. As

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apply

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I am learning history, I have a great knowledge of ancient things

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our city. So, considering

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, I believe

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could be a great opportunity for me to get closer to

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history and I can

also

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teach visitors about the facts and

authencity

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authenticity

of our area. To apply for

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position, I need to know more about

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work and I need your help in

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. I am looking forward to your response, including

requirements

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the requirements

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and details for

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job. Thank you, Muskan Jand

jandmuskan6Sun May 18 2025

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tone

Consider providing a more formal opening, such as 'Dear Director' instead of 'Dear Sir/Madam'. It shows respect for the recipient.

content

The letter effectively communicates your interest in the job and your relevant knowledge of history.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

125 words

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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. Write a letter to the director of the Museum

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

e people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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