The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In two tables, there
are
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the
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apply
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information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
Overall
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, it is obvious that light
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rail
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transit is the most common.
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, the reason why people make good use of the car is that they always need to commute to work.
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,
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are minimum
percentage
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of shopping and leisure activities.
Firstly
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, The
percentage
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of
taxi
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and bus are same, which
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10%.
Also
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, The
percentage
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of LRT is 35%, the
percentage
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of
car
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cars
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is slightly
higer
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higher
, which is 45%. Meanwhile, the
percentage
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of
commute
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to work is 55%, which
higher
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than the
resons
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reasons
for business and taking children to
shool
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school
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, which are 45% and 40$ respectively.
Moreover
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, the
percentage
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of shopping and leisure activities are similar, which
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15%.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transportation modes
  • car ownership
  • proportion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • transportation habits
  • environmental awareness
  • government policies
  • public transport infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • congestion
  • environmental quality
  • future implications
  • adapt
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