In the past, the role of the teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to wide resources of information. There is, therefore, no role for teachers in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly argued that in the past,
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students
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with information, but nowadays there is no need
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in our modern society, as individuals can learn themselves
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the help of developing technology. I disagree that there is no role for
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in modern education. Analyzing the increasing amount of
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because of a lack of clear guidance and insufficiency of personal
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as well as
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different distractions available on the Internet.
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,
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come across difficulties caused by unawareness
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sequence of what to learn if they are not taught by
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. In fact, beginners even do not know how to start or which book is better to read first. These challenges lead to lots of
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and sometimes
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may make
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demotivated.
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, individuals may think that I have no ability to learn after spending much
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without
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precise guidance.
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, these make it clear why the teacher can play a major role in the learning process.
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, in
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world, people would rather learn from the Internet anywhere they want than carry heavy books as many of them do not realize that there
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a lot of distractions available on the Internet.
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, youngsters may be distracted by intriguing video games
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as PUBG and wasting much
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without learning anything is the consequence. It is evidence that it is better to have
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to control
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and provide valuable information. In conclusion, we can never imagine a good education system without the role of
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.
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, it is disagreed that people can get sufficient knowledge themselves, even if they do not have a teacher to give
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guidance. After
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analysis of
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subject,
it is clear that
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teachers
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are an indispensable part of education.

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