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The charts below show the percentage of male and female students of different age groups who studied in Australia for full- time and part- time education in 2006.

The charts below show the percentage of male and female students of different age groups who studied in Australia for full- time and part- time education in 2006.
The bar charts provide key information about the proportion of male and women pupils of various age groups who studied in Australia for full-time and part-time education in 2006. The units are measured in rates.
Overall
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, there was not a big difference between men and women.
In addition
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,
males
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 who 20-24 were the highest number in full-work time,
whereas
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 in part-time, they were the lowest rate.
According to
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 what is shown, females had the highest rate compared to
males
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,
such
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 as those who were 15-19, they achieved 17% for part-time and 7% for full-time. For
males
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, the same age range was 12% for part-time and 8% for full commitment. For 25-29, females had the same percentages both times around 8%
as well as
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males
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 were almost identical rates. The significant age groups were 20-24, with
males
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, they
were
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preferred to work part-time rather than full-time roughly 40%,
however
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, for females around 42%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words males with synonyms.
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