The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the united kingdom in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the united kingdom in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the united kingdom in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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pre chart shows
that
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apply
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the change in
rubbish
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materials in
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the united
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united kingdom
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United Kingdom
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for the two years 1985 and 2002.
Overall
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, in 1985, there
has
Verb problem
was
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been
increased
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increase
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in
matals
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metals
,
miscellanceous
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miscellaneous
and papers over
the
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apply
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time
while
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the
woods
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wood
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,
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apply
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and kitchen
waste
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were
minimaze
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minimal
in
rubbish
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over the shown period. In 1985, it is
obvoiusly
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obviously
seen that
the
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apply
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papers
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paper
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and kitchen
waste
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were the main
waste
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in
UK
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the UK
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people's
rubbish
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with more than 35% and 28%
respectly
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respectively
. other types of
rubbish
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were all nears and the highest
pruption
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eruption
proportion
for others
were
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was
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wood
rubbish
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with
approxemitly
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approximately
8%.
While
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the textiles
rubbish
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has negligible change over the
ruppish
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rubbish
uppish
UK's people. In 2002, there
is
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was
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a
dramaticaly
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dramatic
dramatically
reduction in the percentage of kitchen
waste
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which
reach
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reached
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4%.
while
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the
matels's
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motels's
mateys's
mantels's
rubbish
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remains
in
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at
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the top of the ratio of UK's
rubbish
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with
near
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nearly
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to 45%.
However
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, the glass and miscellaneous
rubbish
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were both increased to reach 16% and 17% in order.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words rubbish, waste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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