The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projection to 2040.

The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projection to 2040.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projection to 2040.
The line graph illustrates changes in the percentage of the
population
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in four selected countries in Asia living in cities between 1970, 2020 and 2040. The countries include the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia. At the beginning of the
period
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, the Philippines had the highest
population
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of almost 32% in 1970.
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figure showed a steady increase, peaking at 50% in 1990 and
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gradually
fell
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by 2010. It was followed by Malaysia,
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, with approximately 30% in 1970. Malaysia, whose
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stood at a substantial increase by almost double to 80% by 2040. The proportion of Indonesia remained the lowest
population
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at the beginning of the
period
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, accounting for about 15% in 1970.
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figure experienced a significant increase from just over 10% in 1970 to nearly 60% in 2040.
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, Thailand's
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went up moderately from just under 20% in 1970 to well under 50% in 2040.
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, the Philippines only recorded up and down over the given time
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.
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, across all the countries, there was an increasing trend during the
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • population
  • countries
  • cities
  • between
  • compare
  • living
  • increase
  • decrease
  • period
  • trends
  • significant
  • changes
  • interesting
  • patterns
  • urbanization
  • overall
  • summarize
  • reflecting
  • future
  • projections
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