The line graph gives information about the number of employment in the three sectors of the economy which is located in
UK
over a ten-year Correct article usage
the UK
period
from 2000-2010
At a glance, what stands out from the statistics is that were shown Use synonyms
a
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the
fluctuate
trends Replace the word
fluctuating
both
the public Change preposition
in both
sector
and self-employment over the periods. Meanwhile, the private Use synonyms
sector
experienced a gradual Use synonyms
fell
over two other sectors.
Looking at details, as regards Replace the word
fall
public
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the public
sector
, Use synonyms
number
of employment started Change the article
a number
the number
just
under 40 in 2000, Change preposition
at just
then
the figure levelled off in the following year before went up considerably until 2005 approximately just under 50. At that Linking Words
point
the figure experienced a slight decline in Add a comma
point,
rate
of Add an article
the rate
employments
around 45 in 2006. Fix the agreement mistake
employment
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consistently Add a comma
Subsequently,
increase
over the periods and met the peak of the rate Wrong verb form
increased
in
Change preposition
at
end
of Add an article
the end
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period
roughly about just above 50. Add an article
the period
Moreover
, self-employment saw similar trends with public sectors and Linking Words
reaching
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reached
the
peak at Correct article usage
a
end
of Correct article usage
the end
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period
with 30 rates of employment.
Unfortunately, if we focus on Add an article
the period
private
Add an article
the private
sector
, it started as the most popular Use synonyms
sector
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than
others Correct your spelling
then
accounted
for just under 50,t in the following years, the figure experienced a gradual Wrong verb form
accounting
fell
over the Replace the word
fall
period
and became the lowest unpopular Use synonyms
sector
over Use synonyms
others
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other sectors
sector
proven with only 20.Use synonyms