The maps below show the porth harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the porth harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the porth harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given 2 diagrams display views of Porth Harbour in different periods.
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,today, there are more replacements than the previous plan in 2000,including:a new dock area added to the port and castle which
disused
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in 2000 and replaced with a hotel.
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, Passenger ferries and a lifeboat are rare features which did not change their position and availability between periods. Detailed analysis of a plan, today,there is one additional
showers
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&
toilets
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amenity above the car park in Porth Harbour.
According to
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the south side of the second plan, the public beach was replaced with a private beach.
Furthermore
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, there is one more way was established between the road which goes to the lifeboat and the hotel.
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, some replacements took happen among the amenities
such
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as the Marina(private yachts) and fishing boats. The right side of the marina(private yachts) has a new cafes& shops facility. Porth Harbour
comprehensived
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with
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water sources and water where located
the
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apply
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south of
the
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this
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port
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and passed
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passed
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to under hotel territory.

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