Example Letter: Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent. Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter: – Describe the problem and why you are unhappy – Arrange for an engineer to visit your home – Request a reduction in your bill

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John Doe, and I am writing to complain about the

irrgeular

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irregular

and

slow paced

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internet service I received from your company. For

past

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the past

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few months, I have noticed discrepancies in your internet service. I thought it was a

temparary

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temporary

glitch;

however

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, it has

became

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a constant occurrence. I am a software engineer and I mostly work from home. My job duties

includes

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software

devlopment

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development

, which requires a reliable source of internet to

succesfully

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successfully

complete my task. These constant irregularities

has

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negatively

impact

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impacted

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my work efficiency and task accomplishment. To mitigate

this

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issue, I request you to schedule an appointment with a

techical

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technical

experts

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(engineer) to inspect and resolve

this

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matter. I am available from Monday to Friday at any time

thus

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, you can schedule

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an appointmnet

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appointmnet

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appointments

appointment

at any time and day of your choosing.

Additionally

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, I would appreciate it if you could provide

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compensation for my troubles. If

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compensation is unfeasible, I would be grateful if you could reduce my next billing to compensate for the substandard service that I received. I look forward to your prompt attention to

this

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matter. Yours sincerely, John Doe

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grammar

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structure

Use clear topic sentences to introduce ideas in each paragraph.

content

Consider adding more details on how the slow internet affects your work.

tone

The letter is polite and respectful towards the service provider.

content

You clearly stated your request for an engineer visit.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Dissatisfaction
Intermittent
Impact
Urgency
Compensation
Resolution
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Inconvenience
Streamlining
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