You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to you regarding the problems

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am facing in the

sharing

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room

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currently and want to request

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another

room

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in the following term. As,

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my

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first semester

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course and

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am trying to put everything together.

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are extremely complicated and managing everything is really hard. Meanwhile,

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am facing some issues within my

room

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. At the time, when rooms were given, I knew that

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will

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be sharing the

room

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with one other girl and

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was completely fine with that. But

nowdays

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, so many of her friends are coming

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the

room

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to chill and for parties which

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my entire work schedule.

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,

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am unable to complete my studies and lacking behind in the course.

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, the other day, somebody took my laptop charger without asking and at

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last

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they lost the item. When I

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, they refused to pay for the item too. All these things are affecting my mental health too.

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,

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want to request that kindly issue me a personal

room

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and I am more than happy to share

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the washroom

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and

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kitchen

area with other people for the coming term. So, that

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could focus on my studies as next semester's curriculum is harder as

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to the current one. I am looking forward

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your reply and please consider my concerns

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making a decision. Best regards, ABC