The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
before and after changes to stop the cars entering
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the town.
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, there will be a major change of addition of a car park on
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both
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side
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of the town and there will be a notice of walking at the start of the road.
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