The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The aforementioned bar graphs represent the number of individuals living in Japan from 1950 to

this

Linking Words

recent year,

along with

Linking Words

it’s

Replace the word

its

show examples

prediction

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

and the percentage of people over 65 years old. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that there was an upward tendency in the number of Japanese but the prediction reported a dramatic decrease until the end of the period. Focusing on the figure for Japanese,

Linking Words

this

Change the determiner

these

show examples

statistics started at the bottom position compared to other periods (84.1),

Linking Words

this

Correct word choice

and this

show examples

continued to grow gradually from 1950 to 2000, reaching the highest point at 127.8.

However

Linking Words

,

this

Linking Words

figure reported a slow decline

by

Change preposition

of

show examples

around 2 in 2015.

Moreover

Linking Words

, a prediction is shown that a significant drop will

be happened

Wrong verb form

happen

show examples

until 2055 and touch 89.9. Turning to people over 65 years old, the most significant number of elderly increased significantly from 4.1 million to 25.7 million in 2005.

This

Linking Words

will continue to rise until 36.5 and

conribute

Correct your spelling

contribute

41% of the total population.