Some people believe that the typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapid advancement of educational technology has sparked debate about the future of traditional
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learning.
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digital innovations are undoubtedly transforming how we acquire knowledge,
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firmly believe that the complete elimination of conventional teacher-student
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interactions by 2050 is highly improbable, as
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connection remains fundamental to effective
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. Of course, it seems inevitable that virtual learning replaces part of conventional
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settings, notably with the development of artificial intelligence
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consequently
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leads to a digital transformation of
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with virtual learning platforms.
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trend can already be observed in brick-and-mortar institutions where teachers
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children to use ChatGPT as a research tool to draw
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.
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, my 7-year-old soon learnt in
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how to repair a balloon with AI.
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, children in China
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from age 5 to use it with the teacher. Extending
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line of reasoning, we can imagine that, in the future, there will
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personalized learning thanks to
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technologies.
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approach could provide a
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teaching with remote learning infrastructure and
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fostering
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academic success.
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, despite these advancements and their advantages, human connections remain fundamental to effective
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instruction seems necessary to develop communication skills and
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the ability to express yourself in public with others
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people.
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that technologies could never substitute verbal exchanges which learn to understand non-verbal and emotional language which the AI lacks. A good illustration of
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is the case of a man who committed
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suicide because the AI with which he used to discuss told him that the
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of his life on climate
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useless.
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, in
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learning environment provides exchanging and debating ideas.
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, in Canada, journalism students have to learn their
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lessons at home and they come to physical
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interactions to discuss topics with their peers.
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, if the digital transformation of
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is unavoidable, the prediction of the end of
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traditional
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by the year 2050 seems somewhat exaggerated. In my opinion, new technologies could never replace
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instruction in learning human skills. Ultimately,
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people must not become
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machines but only rely on them.

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Your introduction clearly states your opinion on the topic, which is good. Try to make your thesis statement more specific to improve clarity.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph clearly connects to the main topic and flows logically. Use clear topic sentences to introduce each paragraph.
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Use more specific examples to support your points. For instance, provide specific details on how technology affects learning.
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You clearly express your opinion and provide arguments for it.
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You effectively discuss the role of technology in education.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a logical progression of ideas.

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