The charts below show the percentage of the energy generate from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the amount of

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the

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energy produced

of

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many sources in the country between 1985and2003

overall

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, as we can see the largest percentage of the energy source was

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oil despite

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the

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hydrogen which

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the

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less amount of energy At the beginning there where a significant increase in the oil source

within

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a

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13

percent

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and

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a really huge difference

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there where an increase in the nuclear source too

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Moreover

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the hydrogen where the same and never changed between those years and been stable at 4

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also

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we can see that the other renewable sources

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increased by 3

percentages

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and that’s a little drop