The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The aforementioned line and pie charts represent the number of village libraries lending their collections from June to September in 2014 and the proportion of varieties of books borrowed. In the big picture, most locations had an increasing trend in the number of

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borrowed, but Ryeslim had a

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trend. Turning to the first graph above, at the beginning of the month, Ryeslip dominated other libraries and started at 300, followed by Sutton Wood at 250, and the others stayed at the lowest point (50). In the next period, There was a gradual increase by around 50 items in both West Eaton and Cruch Mount

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and continued to reach their peak at the same level at 150 in September.

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, Sutton wood rose slowly until September by 50 and experienced a fluctuation in the middle months. Moving to the pie graph, fiction was the most popular book in four village libraries, contributing almost

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half, followed by Self-help, science, and history at 19%, 14%, and 14%, respectively.