You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

Dear Manager, I hope you are doing well. The

perpose

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purpose

behind writing is to request assistance for organising a meeting. I recently attended a conference at our

clinte's

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client's

company, where I observed what

technique

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and

softwares

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software

they use to grow their company. I believe

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apply

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I Should Share Some

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useful

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information with you and other

co- workers

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. In the meeting ,l will give a presentation and cover details about

advance

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Sottwares

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software

which we are not aware

about

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. It would only take 30 - 35 minutes as I would mainly focus on important features of the software. I kindly request you to allow Deep to work with me on

this

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presentation

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because he knows about

this

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software a lot

as well as

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I will get some help too.

Additionally

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, it would be helpful, if you

organise

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the meeting in our company's conference area on May 30th after lunch and let

every one

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Know . yours sincerely, Jemihh

jaimishmodi07Thu May 29 2025

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Make sure to check your spelling, like 'purpose' and 'client.'

coherence and cohesion

Use clear paragraphs to separate each idea better.

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Add a clear summary at the end to reinforce your request.

coherence and cohesion

Be careful with grammar, like 'should' should be lowercase in 'I should share.'

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You clearly stated the purpose of the letter which is good.

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Your points about what you would cover in the presentation were relevant.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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