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Nowadays, many people choose to have children later in life. Having children in your 20s or 30s has its own advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the advantages of having children later, like financial stability, outweigh the disadvantages, although both sides have valid points.
Some people think that people who do not have jobs and get money from the government should do voluntary work so that they can help the community. In my opinion, I agree with this view because it can help them in many ways.
In many countries all around the world, both girls and boys are educated in mixed schools together. However some people suppose that separate education is followed by loads of benefits, I think the drawbacks are more than advantages due to many reasons which I will mention.
The average lifespan of individuals in developed countries becomes higher. This phenomenon attracts issues regarding the elderly’s physical fitness and heightening burdens to the productive populations. To address these problems, the government should promote healthy lifestyles and create new initiatives so that older people can still contribute to the economy.
Some people believe that having friends who always support their opinions is better nevertheless people also think having friends who sometimes have different idea from them is good.