IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Manager, I write
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latter
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 to
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apologize
appologize
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apologise
 that I have another
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schedule
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schedule
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real
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about
 my
course
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 I have a real test
course
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. The
course
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 of management basic training and I have to clear about
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. The
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 will be complate a qualification. I hope to get off time
my
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 job.
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, the
course
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be
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12th
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. I would like to
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appreciate
 of the gift your time. let me know about
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. Thank you for your attention. Kind Regards, Ubay Muhammad

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task response
Make sure to write a clear introduction stating what you need. Keep it simple and direct.
coherence
Try to organize your ideas more logically. Use separate paragraphs for different points.
cohesion
Use correct spelling and grammar. Check your letter for small mistakes.
task achievement
You expressed your request clearly and showed appreciation for the manager's time.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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