The charts below show the percentage of water used for different six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the
water
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utilization in six places globally. The unit of measurement used is percentage and is categorized into three divisions mainly industrial, agricultural, and domestic use.
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,
water
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is primarily used for agriculture in four out of six countries,
while
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in all countries, the smallest portion is given to domestic usage. In detail, Africa, Central
Asia
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,
South
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and South
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East
Asia
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spend more than
three quarters
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three-quarters
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of their
water
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supply in the agriculture sector.
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, 71% of South America
also
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allocated their
water
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resource for farming. Meanwhile, the biggest proportion in Europe (53%) and North America (48%) is used industrially.
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, less than 10% of
water
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usage is allocated for domestic use in Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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.
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, a value of greater than 10% but less than 20% is utilized domestically by North Americans, South Americans, and Europeans with percentages of 13%, 19%, and 15% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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