The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the
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of both
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in estimating world rates of illiteracy in previous years.
Overall
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, in all of
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region
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,
female
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always
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higher
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.
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Asia, the
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in illiteracy was the highest. Regarding 3 regions where they made up a majority of estimating illiteracy.
In
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all of them,
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made up approximately 50%
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South Asian
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stand out at over 55%.
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of males in all 3 regions was roughly 30% ,
which
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in South Asian against the highest of all. Taking
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a look
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the remaining regions where their proportion
were
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minor.
As
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both developed countries and Caribbean people, even female's
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was higher than
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, it
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a small disparity, just more than around 2%. The opposite trend can be seen in Oceania where the
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of females accounted for 20% and double the male's proportion.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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