he charts below give information about the age of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Are Spanish so different to other Europeans? There are some truths in the stereotype,

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most of the traits, favourable and not, are not generalizable. Indeed, we are a heterogenous, multicultural, collective

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different nationalities.

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with the positive features: it is undeniable that we share an outgoing character. To illustrate

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point, on the surface, we tend to come across as spontaneous and straightforward.

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, deep down, it might be more difficult to get an intimate friendship. We are talkative but seldom speak about our feelings. On the whole, we are shy and very jealous about our private life.

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, we move on to the negative aspects:

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, we must admit that we can be too talkative, and we routinely speak too loudly.

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, we could behave in an extremely direct way to

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seen as unpolite. A good example of

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could be that occasionally, we intrude

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the personal space of our interlocutors, and even, we touch them and

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create discomfort. Yet, some detrimental characteristics are not accurate and should

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as

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. To mention but a few, we are

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lazy and unpunctual, do not lisp, eat paella and have

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every day, and

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most of us do

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enjoy bullfights.

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, foreign people must understand that not all

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is hot and sunny, it encompasses several communities, with their own language, culture and landscape.

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, the Spanish stereotype is mostly inexact since

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Spain

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is a multicultural country

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different nationalities,

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it is not plausible that the assumptions made to define us as a collective could be applied to everyone.