The increase in the production of consumer goods (food, clothing) results in damage to the natural environment. What is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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recent era, public concern regarding the growing

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goods has been a topical issue as some individuals argued that negative impacts will happen

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action. In

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response

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issue, I will give my own opinion about the cause of

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problem,

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the solutions. Turning to the reason, the increasing

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of goods produced is caused by

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density because there is a growing trend in the birth rate.

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will directly affect humans’ needs and wants,

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agriculture industry or

a fashion manufacturers

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to past experience,

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country had less than a million

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, with 2% of total spending

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basic needs.

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number

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skyrocketed to more than 3 million population, with total expenditure almost doubled. Another reason is that individuals tend to have

consumerism

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lifestyle influenced by some advertisements or

recommendation

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, they will buy products not because of their needs but the trend. Focusing on the ways that can be taken to

over come

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these problems, making a regulation is essential for the government to control citizens.

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, the policy should prohibit families

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more than two children.

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encougrage

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encourage

locals by raising awareness

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not following consumerism by giving them socialisation about the drawbacks

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being

consumtive

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consumptive

people

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,

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giving

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some negative

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in

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environment

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, the increasing

number

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of goods sold comes from the growing

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of individuals

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following

consumerism

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lifestyle. To overcome them, the government can make a policy to reduce the population and

consumtiveness

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constructiveness

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