You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest spending time together explain why you have time to do this propose some activities

Dear Stephanie, I am

writting

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writing

this

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letter to suggest, how we will spend our

time

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together during my

time

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off.

To begin

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with, I am happy to inform you

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that

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we have planned to celebrate your birthday in America and fortunately, I

get

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got

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some

time

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off from my job. The main reason was my company lost the order from

the

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apply

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America

due to

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Correct article usage

a tarriff

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tarriff

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tariff

and my company

give

Wrong verb form

gave

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time

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off for 1 month.

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language

Make sure to correct spelling mistakes such as 'writting' to 'writing' and 'tarriff' to 'tariff'.

content

Try to include more details about the activities you want to do together.

tone

You have a friendly tone which is great for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

74 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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