The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two given images represent the proposed changes that would
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place in the village of Bunborough between the present day and 2024. A brief overview is that a train station would be erected passing the town
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and proceeding to Lynwich.
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, the fishing ports would be demolished so as to make way for the promenade.
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analysis will begin with the northern side of the town. Regarding the residential area, more housing would be placed with
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would be a planned hotel to the west of the unchanged shops. At the northern-east corner where the railway would start, it would run through the houses to the new station at the
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of the map. Turning to the south of the map is a newly constructed road that would pass through a river. At the sharp turn of the same road would be another hotel just to the west of the beach.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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