The illustration
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
number
of candidates for multiple Use synonyms
task
at Change to a plural noun
tasks
social
centre in Melbourne for the duration Add an article
a social
2000
to 2020. In Change preposition
of 2000
generally
Australians are doing five activities; Change the word
general
such
as film club,martial arts,amateur dramatics,table tennis and musical performances.
At Linking Words
the
first glance over Correct article usage
apply
the
sixty competitors participated Correct article usage
apply
for
Change preposition
in
film
club. Correct article usage
the film
Linking Words
Also
these competitors are stable between 2000 to 2020. Add a comma
Also,
Lowest
Add an article
The lowest
number
of Use synonyms
candidate
joined musical performances in 2000.Fix the agreement mistake
candidates
Therefore
in 2020 lowest Linking Words
number
of members participated Use synonyms
for
amateur dramatics. Change preposition
in
Secondly
minimum contributors available Linking Words
on
table tennis, but in 2020 it Change preposition
in
was
increased dramatically.
Unnecessary verb
apply
In
Linking Words
addition
amateur dramatically in 2000 moderately,but Add a comma
addition,
2020
it Change preposition
in 2020
was decrease
slowly. Change the verb form
decreased
Also
Linking Words
number
of members for material art was Use synonyms
moderately
Change the word
moderate
through
the year.
Change preposition
throughout
To sum up
, all the competitors without film Linking Words
club
are change Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
the
Correct article usage
apply
through
the year.Change preposition
throughout
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