The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the survey of city
residents
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residents'
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percentage of
people
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’s habits in drinking or buying
coffee
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and tea in five Australian cities.
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,
people
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in five cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia, have similar habits in the way of buying
coffee
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or going to a café in
recent
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the last
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4 weeks. The highest
residents
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resident
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behaviour percentage is going to a café meanwhile the least is on buying fresh
coffee
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. Visiting café is the most frequent habit
people
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do
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have
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in drinking
coffee
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or tea
comparing
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compared
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to others. The highest percentage for
this
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habit is in Melbourne, followed by residents in Hobart and Sydney
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apply
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more than 60% of citizens visit
café
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the café
a café
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in these 4 weeks. In the same period of time, buying instant
coffee
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is the second stage of the data. In Hobart and Brisbane, more than one-half
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people
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of people
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do purchasing
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purchase
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semi-ready
coffee
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, followed by those in Adelaide, Melbourne, and Sydney. Another behaviour is buying the fresh one, showing not more than 45%, indicating the least
people
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do in the way drinking or getting
coffee
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, people, café with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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