The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the breakdown of the

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of university

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by sex in Canada in a fifteen-year period.

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the

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of female

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was larger than that of males. Both figures for

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experienced an upward trend throughout the period.

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1992 to 1996, the

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of female

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and that of male

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followed a similar trend. They both rose before

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dropped to

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100,000 and just over 90,000 respectively in 1998.

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the figure for

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females

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dramatically climbed from 100,000 in 1998 to approximately 130,000 in 2004. The

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of male

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remained relatively stable; it fluctuated between 90,000 and 95,000

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1992 to 2003. After 2004, the increase

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female

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was more noticeable

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and

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reached its peak at just under 150,000 in 2007.

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, the

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of male

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reached its highest point at 95,000

at the end

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of the period.