Some people think that university should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Other thinks that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of wheter the course is useful to an employer. What , in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
The argument that graduates from universities should or should not have the knowledge needed to be able to have the correct information or skills provided by the universities about real-life workplace
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is a great topic to be able to talk about.
My opinion
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my past experiences, That the way universities opt to educate
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students is wrong and not right
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Start with a clear introduction stating your opinion and the main points you will discuss.
coherence and cohesion
Use paragraphs to separate different ideas and make your writing easier to follow.
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Provide specific examples to support your points, such as real-life situations or facts.
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You chose an interesting topic to discuss.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Several individuals adapt to work from home and the same goes for students. This is happening because of modern technology that is easily accessible and cost-effective. In my opinion, this is a positive development as it save a lot of time and also reduces other expenses. I will discuss this in detail in my essay below.
Nowadays many people are struggling with their weight, and obesity is always more common. I strongly believe that this is one of the main problems of our society and that we should be concerned about these kinds of diseases.
The allocation of and judicious expenditure of public funds is a lingering topical issue for governments around the world today. Although I agree that it is important to spend money on public services, I do not think money spent on the arts is a useless venture.
People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past.