The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map demonstrates the current layout of a public park
as a result
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of changes
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that occurred
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, and how it looked in 1980.
Overall
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, significant modifications include the addition of amenities
such
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as playground and seating arrangements for the public which
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involve the setting of barbeque. In 1980, there were two gates in the west and the south, for public access to the area.
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, now there are entrances in all four directions of the park which are connected to all the facilities.
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, several years ago, the northwest area included a pond and three benches that people
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utilise to relax. Though, the number of benches has been increased to four recently, with no other major changes.
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, the flowers were planted in the south direction near the entrance,
this
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has been replaced by bushes in 2025. The northeast part of the location was occupied by trees in 1980.
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,
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trees, additional furniture has been introduced
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as chairs, desks and barbeque for residents and travellers to enjoy.
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, the east and south entrance has access to playgrounds for facilitating convenience for children. Alternatively, there was no playground in the area decades ago.

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