The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates how many tourists visited the
coast
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, the
mountains
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, and the lakes of a European nation from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the number of foreign visitors to the lake, the
mountains
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, and the
coast
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over the given period.
Additionally
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, the
coast
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was the most popular at the beginning and
at the end
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of the period,
while
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the lake and the
mountains
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were the least at the beginning and
at the end
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, respectively. In 1987, the total of tourists who visited the
coast
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was 40,000, dropped slightly to approximately 15,000 from its initial value in 1992 and rose significantly to about 75,000 by 2007.
In contrast
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, the lake had 10,000 visitors in 1987, peaked sharply to about double its original figure in 2002 and
then
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experienced a quick fall in 2007.
Furthermore
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, the foreigners visiting the
mountains
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had an initial figure of 20,000 in 1987,
this
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figure increased moderately to 30,000 in 1997, remained the same until 2002
then
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rose slowly to around 35,000 in 2007.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coast, mountains with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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