Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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modules is a good decision,

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others argue that focusing more on their own

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is more crucial. In my opinion, it is more important to learn additional materials from other programmes. On the one hand, paying

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attention and spending all your time

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your own

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for qualification leads to gaining deeper knowledge about one subject. The reason is, learning the same thing for years means you do more lessons and

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practice

about your

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, which will develop you into a more specialized person.

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, Japan does not

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their university

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to do a cross-major and

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them to

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more on one major.

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, their research become more efficient and effective resulting in winning more Nobel Prizes than other Asian countries.

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study

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other

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in addition

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to their main

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helps

students

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to have added value.

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is because they gain

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perspective on seeing something, which

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for them to survive in

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real life.

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more likely to be chosen if they

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additional materials outside their

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compulsory

modules. It

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clearly represents that people

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more eager to learn something new if they

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other

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, which is an essential

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that will boost their performance at work. In conclusion,

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some

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believe that studying other

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modules is important because it will be the added value for them,

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others argue that it is more important to

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more on their own

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because they will have deeper knowledge regarding their

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. I agree that

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need more

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of

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by learning

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studies

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because learning more things will unconsciously improve their

jobs

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performance in the future.