The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how many
billions
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of dollars were globally spent
for
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on
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different kinds of
videogames
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video games
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in a span of 6 years starting
at
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2000.
Overall
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the
games
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categories studied are
:
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mobile phone, online, console, and handheld. From the data provided it is evident that handheld
games
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in all the considered
spantime
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span time
were the most relevant in comparison to all other categories, in
fact
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fact,
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the
quantity
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of
billions
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constantly increased starting from almost 12 and achieving a result of 18 in 2006.
on the other hand
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, Console
games
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decreased during
all
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the period with an initial
value
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of 6 and halved
this
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value
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in 2006. online
games
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appeared on the market in 2001, and they exponentially rose from nearly 1 billion to almost 9
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billions
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billion
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. In the same trend were mobile phone
games
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, which appeared in 2002 and they grew up all the time. In 2002 they were at the same level
of
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online
games
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with a
value
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of 1 billion, overcoming the
value
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of 6
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billions
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billion
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in 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billions, games, value with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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