The diagram describes the production of canned fruits. Summarize the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram describes the production of canned fruits. Summarize the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram describes the production of canned fruits. Summarize the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The
process
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chart depicts the manufacturing
process
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of canned
fruits
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. There are several steps that begin with the picking of
fruits
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and end with the supermarket. After analyzing the
process
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chart, it can be seen that
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the
process
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starts with picking
fruits
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and transporting
to
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them to
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the factory. The third step is choosing the right
fruits
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and
mesure
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measuring their
weight followed by washing them. After that, they are stored in cool storage and in the next step
process
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continues with peeling and dividing the
fruits
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.
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, the diagram shows that, in the ninth step water, juice and syrup are
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mixed into a container and sealed. The next method is cooking on the heat and sterilizing the liquid, followed by cooling it.
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, the cold mixture is filled into cans, and after packing they are transferred to the supermarket.
Overall
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. the production of canned fruit includes fourteen steps, where they pick fresh
fruits
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, clean them and after making juice out of them,
canns
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canned
are ready to transfer to the supermarket.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, fruits with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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