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The table below shows information about the popluation of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows information about the popluation of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The table provides the amount and percentages of changes
of
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 New Zealand people in five different age groups between the
year
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years
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 2011 and 2012.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that elderly individuals were the minority population in both years.
According to
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 what is shown, in 2012 the number of individuals aged under 15 and from 15 to 39
have
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decreased from 898.160 to 896.364 and 1577.256 to 1573.102 respectively, which resulted in declining
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 about 0.2 percent.
In addition
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, New
Zealadn
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Zealand
 residents aged from 15 to 39 remained the most popular group in both years. In terms of people aged 40 to 64, their proportion has slightly
raised
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risen
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 over the period shown by 0.6
percent
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per cent
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. Regarding the oldest group, their amount has significantly increased with about 23
thousands
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 which accounts
the
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for the
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 highest
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rate
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 among all other groups.
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,
all
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the
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 New
Zealand
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Zealand's
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 population have inclined less than one
percent
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per cent
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 over the period shown.

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