The line graph represents the
amount
of thefts per one thousand Use synonyms
cars
in 4 different cities from 1990 to 1999. It is clear from the graph that the United Kingdom has the highest number of thefts, Use synonyms
in contrast
to Linking Words
Canada
.
Between the years 1990 and Use synonyms
1993
the Add a comma
1993,
amount
of stolen Use synonyms
cars
in the UK and Use synonyms
Canada
Use synonyms
has
decreased from 20 and 7 to 17 and 5 vehicles respectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
While
in France and Linking Words
Use synonyms
Canada
there Add a comma
Canada,
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Correct article usage
a gradually
gradually
increase in the Change the word
gradual
Use synonyms
amount
of stolen Change the quantifier
number
cars
from 1993 to 1995, Use synonyms
in addition
, over the same period more British vehicles Linking Words
have been
stolen reaching 19. In the Wrong verb form
were
last
three years, more Linking Words
cars
were stolen in Sweden Use synonyms
accounts
for almost 15 vehicles Wrong verb form
accounting
whereas
in the UK the number has significantly declined from 21 to 16 Linking Words
cars
for every thousand not Use synonyms
stole
Wrong verb form
stolen
cars
. In 1999, the two countries: Use synonyms
Canada
and France Use synonyms
have
reported the same Unnecessary verb
apply
amount
of thefts which is 6 motors.Use synonyms
deemabahnshal