The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents the
amount
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of thefts per one thousand
cars
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in 4 different cities from 1990 to 1999. It is clear from the graph that the United Kingdom has the highest number of thefts,
in contrast
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to
Canada
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. Between the years 1990 and
1993
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1993,
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the
amount
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of stolen
cars
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in the UK and
Canada
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has
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decreased from 20 and 7 to 17 and 5 vehicles respectively.
While
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in France and
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Canada
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Canada,
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there
were
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was
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a gradually
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gradually
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increase in the
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amount
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number
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of stolen
cars
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from 1993 to 1995,
in addition
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, over the same period more British vehicles
have been
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were
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stolen reaching 19. In the
last
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three years, more
cars
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were stolen in Sweden
accounts
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accounting
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for almost 15 vehicles
whereas
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in the UK the number has significantly declined from 21 to 16
cars
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for every thousand not
stole
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stolen
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cars
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. In 1999, the two countries:
Canada
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and France
have
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reported the same
amount
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of thefts which is 6 motors.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, cars, canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • theft rate
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • vehicle theft
  • per thousand vehicles
  • decade
  • steady increase
  • steep decline
  • comparative analysis
  • noteworthy changes
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